This story was a very interesting topic. We thought of it because it was something new occurring in ONW. We had some difficulty gathering shots because we had to film around the marching band. We needed more close ups, but they were hard to get because we had to stand far away. The lighting for Coach Shannon's interview was bad; we should've had her looking into the light. The interviews with Dakota and Brandon were good, the lighting provided depth to the shots and the two cameras made it interesting. The voice over was well written, but if I were to redo I wouldn't repeat the word boys so many times. Also shot variety was an issue. We only had shots of them on the field practicing, ideally we would've wanted more shots at practice and during game day, but those shots didn't work out. The nat noise was good, but could've been louder at some parts.
Overall, the package was well put together, but some things need to be changed for next weeks package.
